Honestly, I really enjoyed the fight, I truly did. But there's still something we need to talk about. The animation is good, but I was expecting more — you know, something like a real manga, something that moves, something alive. Maybe I’m asking for too much, but I think it could make the fight feel much more dynamic. You did add the special effects, and honestly, they were great — really well done. But I was hoping for a real, real, real animated manga. Well, I can't really complain either, because from the start, your project was more of a comic than a VN, so I can understand that. Still, it’s a bit of a shame. But I still really liked the special effects and the music.
Hi, I hope you remember me. Sorry I haven’t been around lately—I’ve been a bit busy. But now I’m here to leave my comment.
First of all, I started the story again from the beginning, just to see if there were a few small changes. Then I continued until the moment when the MC’s little brother gets hit for no reason… and from that point on, everything changed.
Because honestly, you can’t even call this a visual novel anymore. This is a manga—an anime! I’ve never seen anything like it. I think you’re the first—or at least, you’re the first I’ve seen to create something this stylish and clean. I’ve never seen a fight scene so well animated. It was incredible.
The music? Totally insane. Of course, I replaced it with something a bit more epic, like something from Dragon Ball Super, just for the extra hype. But still—wow. I really enjoyed it. The effects, the fight... just wow.
Honestly, the only thing I was expecting was for the main character to drop a One Punch Man reference—but in the end, he didn’t. A bit of a shame, but to be fair, everything was already so clean and epic that it didn’t even matter.
Do you realize what you’ve just done? You created a masterclass.
Honestly—really—if I could give you a 10-star rating right now, I’d do it without hesitation. You deserve the absolute best. Well done.
And it was incredible! How is it possible that I’ve never seen a VN like this before? Wow! The fight was absolutely epic! I’m truly impressed by how the story has been developed so far. Honestly, I can’t wait to see how your project evolves—it's amazing!
Hehe thank you! Really wanted to try and incoporate some kind of animation into it and all, but full on animating it would take way too long for me so I decided to go with still-motion type animation, but that still took onger than I intended haha. But I'm glad to see it's something you all are really enjoying~ Can't wait to get the next update out to you all <3
Oh no, he's a completely different artist haha. Didn't know my style could be considered similar to his though! He has amazing art and I did get a few commissions from him a while back. But yeah, he and I are just mutuals and completely different artists ^^
Aww im so glad you like it! That means a whole lot to hear! Happy that you enjoyed it and that you think so of my work haha it really does mean a lot <3 Expect more heartfelt stuff and other scenes like this in future updates because this is only the beginning~
I saw perhaps your videos on tiktok (it is common there that original content is stolen) with this couple, I really liked your style, and I was surprised when I saw a novel with these characters! I am Ukrainian myself and do not understand English well, and I went through the content that is in the public domain. I am very grateful to you for the interesting idea of the novel. In general, I want to wish you good luck! I hope you can do everything you set out to do! (I wanted to donate to support you, but there is not enough scholarship :( )
Haha, well I do upload on Tiktok here and there so if it was uploaded by GraphicDreamer/@gdanimate then it was me. ^^ I'm glad you liked it and happy to hear you want to support! And hey, even if can't support me through my Patreon or KoFi, it helps a ton that you're playing this game and letting me know that ya like my works~ Love hearing people enjoying them <3
Haha yeah, been keeping Patreons up to date with progress throughout the year. Took a long time since the update itself is so big regarding animated assets and all that. @-@
No still being worked its still being worked on! Progress updates are being uploaded on Patreon ^^ Just been working on the VN, Patreon works, and commissions to earn some money for the VN's assets so it'll take some time @-@ So sorry for the wait!
Frankly it's clean and yet it's a VN at the same time a comic in real life I can't wait to see where your work goes or even direct you in any case it's clean nothing to say keep it up I can't wait to see what happens next :)
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Honestly, I really enjoyed the fight, I truly did. But there's still something we need to talk about. The animation is good, but I was expecting more — you know, something like a real manga, something that moves, something alive. Maybe I’m asking for too much, but I think it could make the fight feel much more dynamic. You did add the special effects, and honestly, they were great — really well done. But I was hoping for a real, real, real animated manga. Well, I can't really complain either, because from the start, your project was more of a comic than a VN, so I can understand that. Still, it’s a bit of a shame. But I still really liked the special effects and the music.
Hi, I hope you remember me. Sorry I haven’t been around lately—I’ve been a bit busy. But now I’m here to leave my comment.
First of all, I started the story again from the beginning, just to see if there were a few small changes. Then I continued until the moment when the MC’s little brother gets hit for no reason… and from that point on, everything changed.
Because honestly, you can’t even call this a visual novel anymore. This is a manga—an anime! I’ve never seen anything like it. I think you’re the first—or at least, you’re the first I’ve seen to create something this stylish and clean. I’ve never seen a fight scene so well animated. It was incredible.
The music? Totally insane. Of course, I replaced it with something a bit more epic, like something from Dragon Ball Super, just for the extra hype. But still—wow. I really enjoyed it. The effects, the fight... just wow.
Honestly, the only thing I was expecting was for the main character to drop a One Punch Man reference—but in the end, he didn’t. A bit of a shame, but to be fair, everything was already so clean and epic that it didn’t even matter.
Do you realize what you’ve just done? You created a masterclass.
Honestly—really—if I could give you a 10-star rating right now, I’d do it without hesitation. You deserve the absolute best. Well done.
I was honestly impressed—and shocked.
Aww thank you! Im glad to hear ya really enjoyed it!
And it was incredible! How is it possible that I’ve never seen a VN like this before? Wow! The fight was absolutely epic! I’m truly impressed by how the story has been developed so far. Honestly, I can’t wait to see how your project evolves—it's amazing!
Hehe thank you! Really wanted to try and incoporate some kind of animation into it and all, but full on animating it would take way too long for me so I decided to go with still-motion type animation, but that still took onger than I intended haha. But I'm glad to see it's something you all are really enjoying~ Can't wait to get the next update out to you all <3
yay^^
I had a question, if you don’t mind. Is Tim Lake Cheetah you, or is that someone else? Because you both have the same style (which I appreciate).
Oh no, he's a completely different artist haha. Didn't know my style could be considered similar to his though! He has amazing art and I did get a few commissions from him a while back. But yeah, he and I are just mutuals and completely different artists ^^
Oh okay, and I totally agree. He's an incredible artist. You’ve learned a lot from him. Thank you for replying ^^
Just finished the build and BY THE GODS, THE FIGHT ??? I was in awe at what I just witnessed and honestly, I'm really hyped for the next update.
Your work is breathtaking. Keep it up !
Aww im so glad you like it! That means a whole lot to hear! Happy that you enjoyed it and that you think so of my work haha it really does mean a lot <3 Expect more heartfelt stuff and other scenes like this in future updates because this is only the beginning~
Cant wait for the rest of the novel im hype
Glad to hear you're enjoying it! And thanks for reading <3
I love the new update! This is amazing, thank you!
Glad to hear you're enjoying it! <3
I saw perhaps your videos on tiktok (it is common there that original content is stolen) with this couple, I really liked your style, and I was surprised when I saw a novel with these characters! I am Ukrainian myself and do not understand English well, and I went through the content that is in the public domain. I am very grateful to you for the interesting idea of the novel. In general, I want to wish you good luck! I hope you can do everything you set out to do! (I wanted to donate to support you, but there is not enough scholarship :( )
Haha, well I do upload on Tiktok here and there so if it was uploaded by GraphicDreamer/@gdanimate then it was me. ^^ I'm glad you liked it and happy to hear you want to support! And hey, even if can't support me through my Patreon or KoFi, it helps a ton that you're playing this game and letting me know that ya like my works~ Love hearing people enjoying them <3
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Thanks for letting me know! ^^
Just came back to see if there is anything because i thought this was dead woah an actual update.
Haha yeah, been keeping Patreons up to date with progress throughout the year. Took a long time since the update itself is so big regarding animated assets and all that. @-@
Beh do you like still update the comic?
No, the Forsaken comic is on hold since I'm working in this VN to see if I want to turn it into a VN or keep it a comic.
is it dead?
No still being worked its still being worked on! Progress updates are being uploaded on Patreon ^^ Just been working on the VN, Patreon works, and commissions to earn some money for the VN's assets so it'll take some time @-@ So sorry for the wait!
I just discovered your work thanks to a Friend but apparently it's there too in all cases it's very good work ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thank youu! <3
Frankly it's clean and yet it's a VN at the same time a comic in real life I can't wait to see where your work goes or even direct you in any case it's clean nothing to say keep it up I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Glad youre enjoying it so far ^^
heads-up, the PC file isn’t tagged as also playable on Linux despite it being so
Ah I will try to tag it! Still learning itch.io and stuff so thanks for letting me know!
damn looks good wish it was also web to play on lol love the art
It's been 50 days
I just finished it. it was good if I may ask why is his name art and what kind of animal is art
Just a name for him I thought of a long long time ago and he's a jackal.
I kinda want to play it. it looks good
Feel free to! Glad you think it does ^^
GD fr! and he's making a VN too, best of luck with that my dude
Thank you! ^^
Nice to see your work here graphic
Thanks! Hopefully it'll be received well when I manage to get the first update out ^^